The second plan for filming

The next plan we had was about a connection between to people getting killed because of there links. The film starts with a scene where a Mafia is killing a victim which is wearing a bracelet, the same bracelet is on his girl friend which we find out after wards. So the victim is getting killed by the mafia, and then the mafia goes to a friends house which the girl friend is there. He first does not know the girl but after he sees her bracelet and then try’s to kill her later in the film. In this plan we were going to have over the shoulder shots in the house where the mafia sees the girl. We were going to have shots of the mafia in high angle to show he’s power. The films locations were going to be at a road that is really dark which there is a road behind my house which looks really scary when its dark. The other location was going to at Max’s house . When presenting to our teach , he liked the bracelet idea but it would be really hard to show in the film. The story was a difficult story plan so we though of having a mobile phone instead of the bracelet. Before the boyfriend dies he calls his girlfriend and then drops the phone on to the floor so the girlfriend hears everything. At the end the mafia who liked the boyfriend sees the mobile phone and try’s to find the girl so that he can kill her. But after thinking we wanted our film to be at a house so we had to change the film plan again.
pictures of what i was thinking when planning the story: